الأحد، 14 نوفمبر 2010

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Educational system* * 



              Educational system is the most important systems in a country. Through education, we can know the level of the country. We can know whether it is developed or not. The methods of teaching help on determining the mentality of the students .it is education which builds the mentality of the youth. It helps them to realize themselves and the world around them. Some educational systems try to make students achieve the highest stages of thought. They use all stages of learning. Others concentrate on the lowest stage of learning, which is memorization. They are learning for the exams.

             Education means the production of the perfect citizen. It should help persons to know themselves and the environment around them. It should not be concerned with memorization only, but it should develop all their skills. Memorization is very important as education without that skill will be meaningless. Students should memorize, understand, apply, and fix the information they are studying. Those are sequential stages. Students should start with memorization, the first and the lowest stage of learning, and move forward to the higher stages.  When education achieve these stages or most of them, it will be perfect. That will help to produce reliable persons who will work for the good of their society.      
         
               Education in Egypt is totally different. It is mainly concerned with memorization. It is the only skill that is measured in exams. There are numerous kinds of questions, but all of them were made to memorize only. Even in math's, students memorize the sums. If it came in a different way to make the students improve their skills, they would say that it is not included in the curriculum. Student always take the information, memorize it, then write them in the exam, and forget it. I do not think that there is anyone who use the information studied in their real life. Learning is to have a paper to use it to work. That’s why we are no more needed in the labor work.

             To sum up, education is the main determiner of the quality of the person. Every country is trying to change the basics of it system to be able to produce reliable persons. They should have the quality that allows them to help in the development of their country. With the development of education, it will result in the development of the whole system of the country. It should improve their skills to be creative persons.

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هناك تعليقان (2):

  1. very good essay Noha ,your introduction is very clear ,your words are understandable.,

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  2. a good draft Noha, write on the final draft

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