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** Illegal Immigration **

             Illegal immigration is one of the most spread activities in the world . It is usually from developing countries to developed countries . This activity is practised by all members of society especially adult as proved by studies . They have more resbonsibilities more than others . Everyone looks how to lead an easy and a confortable life to himself and his family . They start to look for money , but it is not easy to find . Looking for the easiest way , they pay little money to cross the borders illegally . There are two opposing sides related to that activity . The first one claims that they will have a  chance of a new life , higher social status , and higher economic level . The counter opinion argues that they may face death or being arrested , feel lonely , and practise illegal jobs .

             Illegal immigration is a profitable chance for adults .They think that it is their  chance for a better life . They will be able to change their social status .They feel inferior because they have little money . they believe that money is the only way of happiness .By getting it,they will be more relaxed and comfortable . All what they have to do is to finish their work , and they will take their right . It is the more work you do , the more profit you get . Unlike woking in developing countries especially Egypt , who does not work is like who does , and they may be appreciated more than others . By this equality , they will be able to improve their social status and economic level . They will have wealth which is the power of our days .Some adults were lucky and found who appreciate them . They return to their home with the money that they had dreamed of . by this money, they will get whatever they need , and do whatever they want without the limitations of poverty and other factors . Through illegal immigration , they will change their lives completely to the best . 

                In spite of these profits , illegal immigration may destroy their life . Directed to their destination , adults may face death or they may get arrested and both are suicidal acts . In death , they are ending their life actually , but in the second case they are ending it slowly .we can see that in  ' Drawned Dreams " article published by AL-AHRAM WEEKLY in14 November2007. The dreams of over 200 egyptians , who wanted to escape difficult economic conditions were drawned in the ocean .If they were lucky and crossed the borders , they would face other problems . Loneliness is the first and the basic . It will be too hard to live among people that are different from them in every thing  after being between family and friends . unconsciously , They may be involved in dangerous and illegal jobs (as drug trade , organ trade , ..... ) to get a lot of money for little work . They may know their fault , but they do not have a choice or it may be too late . They can not find the appropriate job they came for , and can not return back for lack of money . At last , they realize their fault .

             This topic will still a very debatable one . Anyone looks for his own benifit to gain more money , but I agree with the second opinion saying that illegal immigration is a very dangerous activity . I do not know how anyone risk his life for getting money ?!!!! . Who were looking for new lives may end it . All what they consider is to start their life without financial problems . It will be too difficult to find a job even with little money .To get higher social status and economic level , they have to search everywhere for a job . If they did not find , they have to look in the labour work , and know what qualifications are required to improve themselves .  At first , it will be very hard , but they will be proud of themselves . Illegal immigration is the result of the increasing gab between developed and developing countries .  they have to unify to reduce it .