** Illegal Immigration  ( first draft ) **

             Illegal immigration is one of the most spread activities in the world . It is usually from developing countries to developed countries . This activity is practised by all members of society especially adult men as proved by studies . They have more resbonsibilities more than others . Everyone looks how to lead an easy and a confortable life to himself and his family . They start to look for the best source of money , but it is not easy to find . Looking for the easiest way , they pay little money to cross the borders illegally . And here is the start  ......... . There are two opposing sides related to that activity . The first is that their chance of a new life , higher social status , and higher economic level . The second is that they may face death or being arrested , feel loneliness , and practise illegal works .

             Illegal immigration is a profitable chance for adult men . It is their last chance for a better life . They will be able to change their life . They will be more relaxed and confortable . All what they have to do is to finish their work , and they will take their right . It is the more work you do , the more profit you get . Unlike woking in developing countries especially Egypt , who does not work is like who does , and they may be appreciated more than others . By this equlity , they will be able to improve their social status and economic level . They will have wealth which is the power of our days . They will get whatever they need , and do whatever they want without the limitations of poverty and other factors . Through illegal immigration , they will change their lives completely to the best . 

                 With all these profits illegal immigration may destroy their life . Directed to their destination , adult men may face death or they may get arrested and both are suicidal acts . In death they are ending their life actually , but in the second case you are ending it slowly . If they were lucky and crossed the borders , they would face other problems . Loneliness is the first and the basic . It will be too hard to live between people that are different from them in every thing  after being between family and friends .Without knowing  they may be involved in dangerous and illegal works (as drug trade , organ trade , ..... ) to get a lot of money for little work . They may know their mistake , but they do not have a choice or it may be too late . They can not find the appropriate job they came for , and can not return back for lack of money . At last , they realize their fault .

             This topic will still a very depatable one . Anyone looks for his own benifit to gain more money , but I agree with the second opinion saying that illegal immigration is a very dangerous activity . I do not know how anyone risk his life for getting money ?!!!! . Who were looking for new lives may end it . All what they consider is to start their life without financial problems . It will be too difficult to find a job even with little money .To get higher social status and economic level  they have to search everywhere for a job . If they did not find , they have to look in the labour work , and know what qualifications are required to improve themselves .  At first , it will be very hard , but they will be proud of themseives . Illegal immigration is the result of the increasinging gab between developed and developing countries .  they have to unit to reduce it .